Fellowship of Nene

The world has changed...

I feel it in the water... I feel it in the earth... I smell it in the air...

Much that once was is lost, for none now live who remember it.

It began with the arrival of the Phoenix...

Keep in mind this is still a very much a work in progress, or a prototype of the story, so there are no images, just text.

I actually started this project after finishing Forgor Owl and the Seven Lolis, but ended up shelving it after having finished the first route (Route A) at around 1200 lines.

About a month and a half back I stumbled upon the draft again, feeling it had potential, but required rewriting. I spent a couple weeks thinking about it, and decided, to try and rewrite it, giving myself a month's deadline to see if anything came of it.

Now after a month I've around 2300 lines written, having reached line 300 of the original draft (that's over 2000 new lines), so maybe there is potential in the story, maybe not.

I wouldn't mind some feedback, so I decided to upload it... even if it is still very much unedited, and I really haven't looked back at what I've written choosing to just go forward (other than maybe changing a few names or adding a few lines I felt were required for later things to make sense).